Coby
I was a pupil at Sockburn Primary School and this blog is where I shared my learning.
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Tuesday, August 30, 2016
Fast Feet
FAST FEET
Knowledge
I think that Esela is from Samoa Because lots of Samoans are really fast. Because Esela is the fastest year 8 in his school No because shoes put more weight on you and you go slower.
Comprehension
1 Esela was begging is mum to get him some new shoes.2 The main charities are Esela and his friends.3 The frezza.4 Esela won the race because he did not have his shoes on and he is really fast without his shoes.5 When Esela won the race he look inside his spektakuler bag for a drink as he saw his new pair of running shoes all snagled up in his bag.6 Esela ran in his bear feet.7
Rap or poem
Rap: Fast feet makes my run like iron bolts ready steady kapow I am off like iron bolts zooming! across the finish line. Boom boom boom all I think is a choun choun choun makes like broom broom broom(BOOM BOOM BOOM)
Analysis
It is about boy called Esela who is the fastest 8 year old in his school.
Synthesis
Esela = is excited to race today and look fabulous in his new shoes
2 If I won the race I would be shocked that I won and possible feel bad for my competitors because they also work hard to get to the place they got.
Evaluate
I think that Esela imagined that his favorite thing was at the finish and he wanted it.
Friday, August 26, 2016
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